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Another collage. I hope I'm not getting OCD over these. I've put some Apo floral elements and some other interesting objet d'arts together and created a little garden. This is for all my wonderful dA friends to come visit awhile.

All elements are fractals with the exception of the grass, the sky and the clouds. Fractals done with Apo 2.08 3D Hack and postwork done in Photoshop CS.

Is it too busy?

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:iconbooleann-angel:
Ohh, now this is an image I can sit and just look at for a long time. There is so much beauty here. First of all, I love all the color. You obviously have taken hours and hours of time, thought and care into putting this together.

There is so much here that is really well done. You have given this a wonderful sense of depth with the flowers in the distance. I love the egg shapes, 'cosmic Easter eggs'.
The little clusters of ';plants' are beautifully placed too. You have achieved a balance in the placement of the elements within. That is something I find a mystery. There are people who have the ability to place objects or elements in such a way that they 'appear' to be randomly placed, but because they look so balanced you know that thought and effort has gone into the placement. That is the feeling I get looking at this. The ';pedestal' with the plant on it is perfect, I think. Also the crowning effect is that magnificent sun. It is so exquisite. Two flames right?
I also love how you have given more depth to the entire composition by putting some of the flames 'outside' of the framing you used.

I do like the tree, but for some reason, and I have yet to figure out why, it draws the viewers eyes away from the main part of the image.
Also, I think the blue of the framing also 'competes' with the main part of the image. I think perhaps a small black border might work better?

I think this is simply exquisite work. You excel at this type of composition.
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:icongypsyh:
You are just so good at this ... clever clever clever.

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:iconwolfepaw:
Thanks so much, GypsyH! Do you think it's too busy? Sometimes I get a little carried away. Well, maybe more than a little.

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:icongypsyh:
I think it is interesting ... just a tad busy, but eveything blends. The things on the tree and the tree sort of took my eyes away from all of the other stuff, But I think you are doing great with this form of art. Keep it up.

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:iconwolfepaw:
Thank you for your honest input and I sincerely appreciate the encouragement.

I need to try a few more of these. I will go toward keeping them a little simpler. I was just having so much fun, "Ooh, I'll put this one in. Oh, wait, what about this one?..." And finally my Photoshop scratch disk got full and I had to close it and reopened it and give it more scratch disk space. That helped some.

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Wolfepaw
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:iconakaryuuaki:
That looks amazing!
I love all the different colors and shapes!
It's so cool! :D

I wish that it was the garden in my backyard... (Seriously :nod:)

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:iconsoulabode:
This is awesome. :omg:

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:icongypsyh:
I am a basic artist and nothing special really. I just do my thing. LOL You are really really good at those pretty ones you have been making and putting all of this together can be hard. I bet you would make a beautiful one with nothing but those pretty little flames you been doing and you are so creative that you will do something to blow us out of the water. I wish I knew a lot that I don't. I watch so darn many peeps that it takes me all day to answer comments and get my stuff posted. So if you have favd anything .. let me say Thank you now. I am glad you understand what I saw, now someone else might think differently. It was merely my opinion. I am more on the delicate side of making art, so I see it different. But you are really a good artist. :iconsincerelystephanie:

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:icondebi62:
How pretty!!!!! You go girl!!! Be an Apo gardener!!! :D

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Art thieves unite!! Then go as a group for psychotherapy!!!! You really do need it when you can't seem to respect other people's rights!!!! :(
:iconmoomyfire:
I want a garden just like this one! Just beautiful. :clap: :D

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:icongabiw:
So sweet, beautiful and creative :clap: clap:
I love it :-)

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